Bad writing in manga

[sammich]

I hate it.  it makes me want to write my own and plan it from start to finish and not introduce stupid characters and never finish their arcs or pad out the story just so the publishers can make money because the title is popular wtf.

Some manga for discussion....

HORIMIYA.  I like it a lot.  I LOVE nerd!Miyamura with his long hair and glasses.  I hate how anime is like "LOL He's ugly because he is shy!" it's like.. no he's not.  I was fine with his piercings and tattoos.. those had meaning and I felt bad for him because of that.  ...but then he wanted to BE BRAVE or someshit and cut his hair.  and no longer needs glasses???  I hate that characters in manga can remove glasses like it ain't no thang.  I wear glasses and I can't see shit without them.  at least pretend he wears contacts.  Also Hori's dad. lol  shit.  both her parents.  They were gone for forever and she had to be a STRONG PERSON to raise her little brother.  Now they're both home and she is annoyed with them. ok. whatever.

I'm gonna continue this series... but there are some issues.  also Tooru and Sakura.  Sakura likes him but Tooru doesn't know she exists??? lol why introduce that?  
Also Sawada (girl who likes Hori) is kinda annoying because Hori pretends it's NBD but it legit bothers Miyamura.... also he reminds Sawada of her dead bro? lol?  ok. 

[JammerLea]

I really like Horimiya. I enjoy the chemistry between Hori and Miyamura, and how they are more complex than how they first appear. But yeah, I was sad too when Miyamura cut his hair. I mean it was ultimately because he thought his gloomy rep was hurting Hori's rep, but I wouldn't think a haircut on its own would fix that lol. But I think they've already mentioned hair grows fast, so hopefully that means it'll grow out again. oAo

I think the appearance of her parents is the one thing that really bugs me, because it throws off the whole setup. But I'm guessing leaving two high school kids home alone constantly might have been an issue? I wish there was more explanation about what her parents did for work, as that may clear up some of that (but with the way it's handled, it doesn't feel like the author knows what they do either lol)

I'd like to see more progress with Tooru and Sakura, but currently their interactions are so spaced out. I hope more occurs with them. Or even more development for Yuki since she's Hori's best friend.

[sammich]

Yeah Yuki is pretty much just a cheerleader. lol Maybe she's gay? IDK that would be interesting. =A= something should develop with the side characters.